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Dawn at Glaslyn, Snowdonia (revision2)

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Mark
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Re: Dawn at Glaslyn, Snowdonia (revision2)

Post by Mark » Sun Sep 26, 2021 6:38 pm

I also think tarn is better, more atmospheric. My initial ignorance is no reason to drop the word. ;)

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Re: Dawn at Glaslyn, Snowdonia (revision2)

Post by Matty11 » Sun Sep 26, 2021 7:55 pm

Thanks Dave and Mark. One reason I read Joyce is for obscure words eg flapdoodle

tarn is back :D

cheers

Phil

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