Re: Dawn at Glaslyn, Snowdonia (revision2)
Posted: Sun Sep 26, 2021 12:38 pm
I also think tarn is better, more atmospheric. My initial ignorance is no reason to drop the word. 
tarn is back
cheers
Phil
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Re: Dawn at Glaslyn, Snowdonia (revision2)
Posted: Sun Sep 26, 2021 1:55 pm
Thanks Dave and Mark. One reason I read Joyce is for obscure words eg flapdoodle
tarn is back
cheers
Phil
tarn is back
cheers
Phil