So Sad
Racial hate
crimes continue
even during this
Corona pandemic.
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So Sad
Re: So Sad
When it's written without line breaks it reads like a sentence, a piece of prose.
Maybe other people will disagree.
Anywho, it's just my opinion.
Maybe other people will disagree.
Anywho, it's just my opinion.
Re: So Sad
Hey
I see exactly what Colm is getting at: this is basically not only prose but is just a straightforward statement. It tells us something but does not show. IN other words, whether poem or not, it offers too little to really do more than a piece of journalism. Interestingly, if posted as art in an art gallery, its location would automatically changes its significance even if it did not alter its quality as art.
Greetings
Dave
I see exactly what Colm is getting at: this is basically not only prose but is just a straightforward statement. It tells us something but does not show. IN other words, whether poem or not, it offers too little to really do more than a piece of journalism. Interestingly, if posted as art in an art gallery, its location would automatically changes its significance even if it did not alter its quality as art.
Greetings
Dave